Here is draft one (minus the conclusion and logs/summary) - I have edited down some of my section now but its still 2000 (this is excluding references and including the intro and conclusion for it) - please suggest any other parts I can get rid of - maybe highlight in red?


Also the references alone at the end count for 700 words so dont be too alarmed with the word count!

UPDATED DRAFT WITH JEAN'S RECOMMENDATION: (SAT 20TH MARCH)



UPDATE NUMBER 3: WITH ROYCE'S LOGS AND RECOMMENDATIONS ( TRIED TO NEATEN UP CALCULATIONS AND GOT RID OF CONCLUSION TITLE) Mon 22nd March





DRAFT 7 - UPDATED ON MON 23 MARCH -after much effort we are still 22 words over the limit, Sophie can you cut your bit alittle bit more? I already downsized the other bits as much as I could.

To do:
1) double check table of content, page numbers
2) double check spelling - read from beginning till the end
3) double check your student numbers
4) Sophie to cut 22 more words - so we end up with 3300.